(1) I have always enjoyed nature and being outdoors. (2) Last fall I was taking one of my regular nature hikes, when I thought a
bout how much my friends and family would enjoy the beautiful scenery surrounding me. (3) I wanted to share the beauty of the outdoors with them. (4) When I spoke to my parents they suggested that I take a photography class, so that I could take pictures and share them. (5) I thought this idea was wonderful, so I enrolled in an evening photography class. (6) I learned how to focus my camera. (7) I also learned how to choose what to photograph. (8) After each class I took my camera and went for a walk. (9) While I walked, I photographed trees, flowers, birds, and more. (10) When I compared the photos, I noticed that they improved each week.
(11) After my final class, I took pictures of a stream, a cardinal, and a snow-covered tree. (12) With the help of my photography teacher, I printed out the pictures and put them in frames. (13) I hung the photographs in my bedroom.
Which sentences can be combined to improve the flow of the narrative?
A) sentences 6 and 7
B) sentences 2 and 3
C) sentences 8 and 9
D) sentences 10 and 11
Sentences "I learned how to focus my camera" and "I also learned how to choose what to photograph" have identical subjects (I) and verbs (learned). Therefore, it would be better to combine them to improve the flow of the narrative: I learned how to focus my camera and also how to choose what to photograph.
Answer: One time was when I moved to a new school after elementary school and I had to make new friends completely and adjust to middle school life which was way different than elementary school. The school was bigger, lockers with locks, huge cafeteria, etc.
