Answer:
(1) In "The Gettysburg Address," Abraham Lincoln says, "the brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract." He believes that the world has taken notice of the battle but that the war is far from over.
(2) He urges that it is important "for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining . . ." He hopes that others will continue to fight for the freedom of all men.
(3) Finally, he is determined to make sure that, "these dead shall not have died in vain."
Explanation:
The second quotation is formatted wrongly and has been revised properly.
First of all, the sentence is grammatically incorrect and the word important was added before the quotation mark to make the quote have a better meaning.
Next, the quote was modified by omitting some unnecessary words which had no impact on the overall meaning of the sentence.
. that this nation . . . was omitted.
Answer:
I like pizza. I enjoy the smell of it when it comes out of the oven. I love the taste of its gooey goodness on my tastebuds. I find the smell very pleasing. Pizza is my top favorite food. If I could, i'd eat it every day.
Explanation:
I've never read this but i'd suggest if you haven't already comparing and contrasting what happened at the beginning and what happened throughout and the end. Make sure these are important details. You can include some that aren't important as well.
As for an introduction something simple like, "Many experience changes throughout their life this is about the changes throughout (insert main character's name)'s life".
