Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar. Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Answer 1

The answer is:

Yesterday, Darius went to the store because he wanted food. At that moment, he ran into his teacher there and they talked about his latest project for a long time. When he arrived home, he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Transitions connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs, providing cohesion and showing how different concepts relate to one another. Temporal transitions express time, frequency and duration, as well as introduce a beginning, a middle and a closure.

Answer 2

The transition words I have used to alter the following paragraph are in CAPS.

Darius went to the store BECAUSE he wanted food. WHILE shopping, he ran into his teacher AND they talked about his latest project, WHICH he decided to base on gourmet cooking.