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Gelneren [198K]
3 years ago
6

Read the sentence. Floating in the pool, Sarah saw a bee trying to dry its wings. What is the best way to revise this sentence?

English
2 answers:
Tamiku [17]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

Everything in bold is what i revised or added.

Explanation:

Floating in the pool, Sarah saw a bee trying to get out of the pool to dry its wings.

MrRissso [65]3 years ago
3 0

Answer: Sarah saw a bee floating in the pool trying to dry its wings.

Explanation: This sentence is the one that expresses the idea more clearly. The other options follow an order that can be confusing for the reader. Word order is an important element of sentence construction. Ignoring this element can result in confusing, unclear sentences that do not accurately convey the intended meaning.

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