( Need Help ASAP). ( Need to be 400 words). I will Mark Brainliest as soon as it let's me. I appreciate anyone's help and effort
. ( I POSTED A PICTURE OF WHAT I WROTE DOWN). Can someone look over my essay and make sure I included - (Extremely vivid sensory language, Figurative language, Comparative and /or Superlative adverbs or adjectives, Stong word choice and appropriate voice, Tone and Style. Uses correct mechanics and grammar). WILL MARK BRAINLIEST.
This essay is exceptional except for the fact that you gaze off in the essay. First you start of talking about your childhood. Then you go a completely different place. Other than that its great.
