(1) Exercise provides many benefits. (2) It strengthens muscles. (3) It helps prevent unhealthful weight gain. (4) It may reduce
the risk of some cancers. (5) These are not the only benefits of exercise, however. (6) A recent study concludes that exercise provides mental health benefits too. (7) During exercise, the body produces endorphins. (8) These natural compounds help people relax and may lift people’s spirits. Which is the most effective way to vary the length of the sentences in the passage?
Combine sentences 2, 3, and 4 to create a series.
Divide sentence 6 into two shorter sentences.
Insert more detail into sentence 7 to lengthen it.
Rewrite sentence 8 to make it into a subordinate clause.
(1) Exercise provides many benefits. (2) It strengthens muscles. (3) It helps prevent unhealthful weight gain. (4) It may reduce the risk of some cancers. (5) These are not the only benefits of exercise, however. (6) A recent study concludes that exercise provides mental health benefits too. (7) During exercise, the body produces endorphins. (8) These natural compounds help people relax and may lift people’s spirits.
Which is the most effective way to vary the length of the sentences in the passage?
Combine sentences 2, 3, and 4 to create a series.
Divide sentence 6 into two shorter sentences.
Insert more detail into sentence 7 to lengthen it.
Rewrite sentence 8 to make it into a subordinate clause.
The question asks about revisions to create more sentence length variety. There are already many short sentences so we want to choose an answer that would create a long sentence. Combining sentences 2, 3, and 4 would reduce the number of short sentences and create one long sentence but keeping clarity.
The one that represent tradition in the face of change would be : Nathan.
Throughout the face of changes, nathan is the one that still held traditional value from all the character above. He still insist on working hard on the land and really dissapointed when none of his children want to follow his footsteps.
The 3 things you first need to do to respond to a prompt are 1. write a thesis statement and list key support. 2. Write your response. Include your thesis statement. 3. and provide your key support in well-organized paragraphs with topic sentences.
Because responsible is being able to be trusted to do a task right? So loose would be the opposite since if you're loose(crazy,out of control,ect) you wouldn't be trusted as being responsible
