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coldgirl [10]
3 years ago
8

Read the following text from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her word choice?

English
1 answer:
astra-53 [7]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

"A mean group of guys"

"The dudes"

"Swiped all kinds of stuff"

"A smart guys who was around then"

All of these could be made to sound more professional.

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