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Sidana [21]
3 years ago
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How to revise this paragraph

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Norma-Jean [14]3 years ago
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Answer:  Instead of saying "This is a good thing", say "I believe this is a bright idea" (or you can stick with "good idea"). Also, I wouldn't put so many exclaimation points. For example, putting an exclaimation point after "bad situation" is not necessary.

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