In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
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3 positives :
> concepts are still fresh in your mind
> you will graduate college on your set year, no gap year
> gain important and wise life skills when attending school
3 negatives
> more pressure straight out of high
school
> mostly liked won’t be able to get a job, no monkey saved
> Don’f have time to think on what it’s you really want to do
I believe they think she just crazy and might turn into her family members. but she was joking wit her friend because her friend assumed she was just going to be that way. I mean she can be curious want to get into voodoo not sure have to read into the story to understand more
Answer:
yeah
Explanation:
but am not really into music writing...sorry
