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By just reading the beginning, I can tell it's pretty good! A few suggestions: Try not to use "also" in the beginning of a sentence. I feel like it sounds a bit unprofessional. This sort of goes for "this also". One last thing, when putting in the name of an article for example, make sure to put quotes. I would also recommend to state where you cited textual evidence, not really for articles, but just for the future. Besides that, looking good!
I know it's pretty late but I thought I'd still respond
I think it’s D, but I’m not sure. While talking in real life we people often use simple words.
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THESIS: The book Throne of Glass is about having a desire to achieve success while overcoming obstacles, due to the fact that Celaena is on a quest for freedom by achieving the Kings championship.
Author(s): Sarah J. Maas
My favorite place is the town, in the town I hang out with my friends; the most amazing people I have ever met. The town is not only the best place to buy things but also it’s the best place to meet new people. Usually when I go to the town I go down the road to the main alley and go get some coffee; Best coffee in the (city name)