Answer:
First: Check for spelling or grammar mistake, and fix those. Second, check the formatting and structure, you could have the most perfectly grammatically correct piece of writing, ruined by the fact that nothing is in order. Thirdly, look at words and phrases to make sure you are not using any ambiguous language.
Morbid and Cheerful
Virulence and Mildness
Propagate and Discourage
I'm assuming these should be right from what I've learned from a thesaurus. Hope this helps.
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In “Hanging Fire” Lorde's focus is on several issues that confront the teenager within the poem and affect teenagers in the extended world: the preoccupation with death, the problem of living in a sexist society, and the fear of isolation within the home