I'm not going to write the whole essay, but I will give you three head points.
1)
Ok, the first idea is, students are falling weeks behind on both literacy and numeracy subjects due to the new implanted studying root, online study.
dot points to add in this paragraph are,
-from year 5-9, studies have proven that 23-33% decline in numeracy and a 15-22% decline in literacy compared to classroom learning
-students receive an annual 25% decline in numeracy learning growth and 10% in literacy growth studies show.
if you need evidence look at this website, https://www.vu.edu.au/mitchell-institute/schooling/new-research-shows-the-impact-of-online-classroom-on-learning
2)
Next, online study negatively impacts students' social wellbeing.
dot points to add in your paragraphs are
-Rayane Alamuddin, an associate director of research and evaluation found that “Students talked a lot about really missing being in person with their classmates, with their colleagues, with their faculty members, and having those spontaneous, organic conversations and relationships,” she said. “They miss the ones they make in the context of their college education specifically, because not only does it make them excited about learning and hold them accountable and motivate them to stay engaged in school, but they also actually learn a lot more.”
-Not only does it negatively affect social development in children, the social decrease affects their love of learning.
3)
Last, not every child has a welcoming household, or are lucky enough to be able to afford such luxuries.
dot points you can add in are,
-Some children have other people at home to care for.
-82% of children under the age of 18 have at least one sibling, this is bound to cause distractions.
OTHER POINTS!
- do NOT copy and paste this, write it by yourself because I am not the best writer
- This has come from my perspective that it has a NEGATIVE affect, not a positive affect, if you need one positive affect I can write another one of those prompts.
- Make sure to use as much evidence as you can
- Use the TEEL or PEEL structure, Topic sentence, Explanation, Evidence, Link.
- your TEEL/PEEL can become TEEEEL as you can have multiple evidences and explanation, make sure you have an even number of both.
- EXPLANATION must come first!
-evidence is basically statistics, facts, quotes, etc.
- BRAINLY will not let me paste links for your bibliography, if you need links just copy and paste each topic sentence into your web browser and find a good website to use in your bibliography
- in your bibliography make sure to use the date it was written, the date it was updated (if the website has been updated) AND the author, if one or none of these things can be found, put "unkown"
-HARVARD REFERENCING!!! (ok you dont NEED this but it could be helpful)
- good luck!
