A. amateurish; it has a negative connotation, and the tone of this passage is critical.
Answer:
Run-on Sentence or Comma Splice.
Pronoun Disagreement.
Mistakes in Apostrophe Usage.
Lack of Subject-Verb Agreement.
Misplaced Modifiers.
Sentence Fragments.
Missing Comma in a Compound Sentence.
No Clear Antecedent.
Explanation:
