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Answer:
i can write a poem
Explanation:
the light from the mirror cast shadows of black but when i stared at those shadows, the shadows stared back
as i walked in the street I heard someone's feet, but as i looked back, where was nothing but black
a second I saw fireflies fly, the next they said goodbye
i felt lonely and scared, then i saw a glowing light, as if it dared me to follow and i followed
The closer i walked, the more quit it got, then i fell down a rathole and there i rot
I think controversial, because things can look fake but sometimes they can look real. i don’t know though.
Asian kidz died. Rip in piece Asian kidz.
