The baker donated bread to the fund-raiser in a large box. Which is the best revision of this sentence? In a large box, the bake
r donated bread to the fund-raiser. The baker donated to the fund-raiser bread in a large box. The baker donated a large box of bread to the fund-raiser. In a large box, the fund-raiser had bread donated by the baker.
The best revision of the sentence is the following one: The baker donated a large box of bread to the fund-raiser.
Explanation:
The prepositional phrase "of bread" establishes that the large box donated by the baker contains bread. Therefore, it is unnecessary to use the PP denoting location "in a large box" and the NP denoting the donation "bread" if these two meaning components can be combined in the NP "a large box of bread". This NP entails that the baker has donated bread and the it has been given away in a large box.
Some people may say it is a good idea because you can get to learn more things because your in school year round and some people may say it is not a good idea because you won't get a summer break. Personally I agree that it is not a good idea because I feel like if you don't have a break between learning you will start to get tired of it and it can be bad for your mental help to be doing school work 24/7. Everyone may have a different opinion on this topic.
