Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
The correct answer to the question above is (b.) death. In Morte d'Arthur, the black hoods worn by the ladies who come to take King Arthur away on the barge are used to symbolize death.
Answer:
23. C
24. D
Reason:
23. dont know how to explain
24. The man always wants to be in the place that he is not in or in other words, wanting what you can't have
Answer: an adverb .
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(Note: Adverbs can modify other adverbs.).
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<span>Ernest Shackleton's South! primarily uses the writing structure of "problem and solution, although it should be noted that other structures are used as well. </span>
