<span>Some people say the bell cracked again in 1835 while it was tolling for John Marshall’s funeral.
John Marshall died in 1835, and it is said the bell tolled for his funeral. Using "while" as the conjunction in this sentence makes the sentence the clearest. If the bell cracked during an important funeral it would be more likely to become a legend rather than having the events of the funeral and the cracking happening at separate times. </span>
The only problem I seen wrong with it was there was one word spelled wrong and that was basis. Other than that, everything looks fine.
For number 7 i think the answer is B
Answer:
If I could have any job, I would probably be an author. I am pretty good at writing, and recieve excellent remarks on pieces that I write. Math isn’t my strongest subject, nor is it as easy as it to write because of all the complicated steps.
Explanation:
a narrative writing is a piece when a main character characterizes the writing. Uses words like “I”. This is just a beginning part for an essay.
can you please post the sentance?
