Really great! Just some spelling things like the word crazy in the second paragraph doesn’t need to be capitalized. Also, in the line saying “they never here that SOUND” it should be hear instead of here :). Hope that helps x
Answer: When the speaker says you he is refering to everyone who will ever listen to what they are saying. They are also reffering to themselfs whenthey say this because they are reflecting off of their experiences and trying to relate to their audience