Question

I am writing a poem, and i need me some critics! please help and tell me how you think of this one, thanks!

Answer 1

It's really good! Great poem <3

Great writing, you're talented :)

Answer 2

Really great! Just some spelling things like the word crazy in the second paragraph doesn’t need to be capitalized. Also, in the line saying “they never here that SOUND” it should be hear instead of here :). Hope that helps x