Tbh idek if I would have known then I would have been the smartest person alive
The way the author makes the story is what actually affects all of that
A young man discovers that his father is actually a god.
This scenario is possible in mythic literature because in both Greek and Roman mythology the gods were known to have affairs with humans. In the story, Percy Jackson finds out that his mom and Zeus were in love at one point and they had a child, him. The novel is also impacted by mythic literature in may other ways, including Percy's adventure into Hades, the character, Grover, and various other elements.
Let's reconstruct this sentence.
"Everyone I know complain" doesn't make much sense.
Popping an "s" on the end of "complain" might do the trick, lets try!
"Everyone I know complains" ah, there we go. Much smoother.
Next section!
"Complains because these days backpacks weigh a ton."
Though this may sound correct, it is still quite a bunch. Let's fix that.
Rearranging your words might work.
Maybe in the section that says "Complains because these days" we can change that to "Complains these days because" Much smoother, and easier to read.
We have so far is: "Everyone I know complains these days because"
Yay, let's continue.
The remaining of the sentence is fine so we can put it on the end of our freshly constructed sentence.
Our final sentence should be:
"Everyone I know complains these days because backpacks weigh a ton."
