New paragraph:
When I have plenty of money, there are three things I'd like to buy. First, I need to a buy a new luxury car. Next, I want to buy a modern television. If I have enough money left over, I'm going to buy a flower-shaped lamp for my living room.
This paragraph is about my friend Nicky. Nicky is an easy-going guy, he's very friendly and nice. Sometimes, he may be stubborn because he likes to get things done his way, but still, he is a great pal. He likes making people laugh, and that's why he memorizes many jokes.
By creating a specific description of the time and place
I do not know what you are speaking about peculiar?
This thesis statement is an effective comparison\contrast statement because:
It mentions the two objects of comparison; A Jury of Her Peers and The Lamb of the Slaughter.
It explains what things are alike in both texts; use of symbolism, point of view and characterization to explore the stereotypical roles of women in the early twentieth century.
It includes what the author would like for the reader to understand about the topic, which in this case is the stereotypical roles of women in the early twentieth century.
