Paragraph 1.
"Oh!," said Goldilocks, "the controlling idea is too vague. As a reader, I can't tell what your essay will really be about. When writing a controlling idea you want to be specific."
Paragraph 2.
"Oh my," exclaimed Goldilocks. "This controlling idea is too wordy. A controlling idea should be clear and concise. That was I will know what your essay is about."
Paragraph 3.
"Well, well," Goldilocks said. "this controlling idea doesn't address the prompt. When you look at what it is asking you to write, don't you see how it is asking you to explain the importance? This just says it is is important. But I do like how you thought of another word that means to not give up!"
Answer:
red is the only adjective in the sentence
Explanation:
<span>The description of the windows as empty eyes with a ghostly look creates a dark mood.
This poem is very dark in tone and by the descriptive words used. </span>
Newsboys worked 10 hours a day and 6 days a week
Answer:
a. personalizes your ideas.
Explanation:
a. personalizes your ideas.
b. is not overly technical.
c. quantifies a speaker's ideas.
d. is harder to manipulate than statistics or testimony.
e. enhances the speaker's credibility.
One example of this would be using a fact that has already been proven to shed light on a current problem.
Please remember to add options for great answers?
