For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
<span>C. Provide training required by OSHA standards
One of the responsibilities that employers have, under OSHA, is to provide training to their employees. Everyone has the right to equal access to this training so that everyone is aware of their rights, the processes to follow in case something goes wrong, and the appropriate OSHA contacts/guidelines.</span>
A. I ate a slice of bread last night.
B. Sita lost her earring in the park
C. I sold my watch to him last month
Answer:
Pathos, because the author uses facts and figures to show that the information is correct D. Ethos, because the author uses an expert source to make his argument more credible
Explanation:
Answer:
why??????and says who.........