When a writer edits his/her own work, all four errors in grammar and usage listed above, need to be looked for.
a. Ways to replace overused words. A paragraph sounds clumsy when the same words are used too many times in a sentence/paragraph
b. Problems with verb tenses. It is very important to use the same verb tense throughout your written work.
c. Sentences missing commas and periods. If a sentence does not contain commas and periods, it is confusing and ends up being a jumble of words.
d. Misused or missing capitalization.
The answer choice the first one A
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You can use this as your hook if you'd like:
"Have you ever wondered how a certain species can affect the world? Well, Jellyfish are an aquatic species that live in oceans, which they have their negative effects on the world. As a matter of fact, jellyfish are overpopulated, and this can cause many effects, especially to fisheries, a place where fish are caught."
I did my best with that, but you can fix it how you'd like.
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line 12 in what article? you don't have any excerpts