Mowgli's battle/affair with shere khan
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What change should be made in sentence 3? (Mikayla placed the dough on her right hand and then spins it into the air, trying to mimic the chef.)
A. Insert a comma after "fist".
B. Change "then" to "than".
C. Change "spins" to "spun".
D. Change "it" to "them".
Answer:
The change that should be made in sentence 3 is:
C. Change "spins" to "spun".
Explanation:
The sentence "Mikayla placed the dough on her right hand and then spins it into the air, trying to mimic the chef" is incorrect for only one reason - the shift in verb tenses. The sentence begins with a verb in the simple past and, all of a sudden, changes to the simple present. It is clear that this is a sequence of actions that took place in the past, one after the other, so the shift is inappropriate in this case. To correct it, we must change the verb in the present form (spins) to the past form (spun):
Mikayla placed the dough on her right hand and then spun it into the air, trying to mimic the chef.
Answer:
The essay should be about you can do everything right for someone. You can put them in the best school get them the best teachers, buy them the best supplies, but you can't make them succeed. You can offer someone help but if they accept it or is their choice. You could talk about a parent getting their child into the best school but he doesn't want to be there and fails. You could also say you have to make sure the Horse wants the water. As in the child wants to go to that school.
Explanation:
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