--This is about 105 words
The poet uses strong verbs to create rhythm and to develop the meaning of the poem. They use alliteration. They use it in one-syllable words such as "burn, break, blow." This creates a kind of beat and rhythm in the poem. It also emphasizes the meaning of those words. There was also a lot of "me" in the sonnet. In the line, "Your viceroy in me, me should defend, uses repetition in "me" to emphasize it and to prove a good flow into the next line. This is only a couple of ways in which poets can create rhythm and develop meaning in their poems.
The sentence that had correct sentence structure is
Before we were able to get financing we had to have the house appraised by independent appraiser
The fourth excerpt should be right
In the final paragraph he says serve the unknown
