This was the only thought on young Pablo's mind after the hurricane as he looked at the fallen trees, [1] toppled power lines * and homes without roofs in their town.

"Is that bicycle yours?" asked Mr Sanchez.

Pablo said, "Yes, it's mine."

"Then jump on its seat and ride to the community centre [2]. You can help make ten thousand ham and cheese sandwiches for folks who were evacuated."

Explanation:

[1] comma should be added to separate the list since there are more than two items.

* you may wish to add a comma here too depending on whether you follow US or UK conventions

[2] you don't have to change this if you're using american spelling

i hope this helps! :D sorry if i missed anything.

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2 years ago

In the bold portion of the narrative, the author tries to use a flashback to develop tension. However, the flashback does not cr

Rashid [163]

Can you tell me more about the flashback, you Are just putting a fragment of the part we need, to analyze and rewrite it, you need to tell me more about the original flashback.

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3 years ago

SAT Question of the Day:

Sever21 [200]

I would say the answer is probably A. Foreboding means fearful or a feeling that something bad will happen, which makes the most sense in the context of the sentence.

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3 years ago