Romeo repeats his request for news of Juliet twice because it is the most important question for him. He says that "nothing can be ill, if she be well", meaning that none of the other news is as important.
Balthasar's response suggests that he's trying to make the news easier for Romeo to handle. He uses peaceful imagery like "her immortal part with angels lives" in order to soften the news of her death. He saw Juliet being laid in the monument himself, no one told him the news.
The description of Romeo as pale and wild foreshadows his death, as a corpse would be pale and 'wild' means that he looks like he is about to do harm to someone else or himself.
The mistakes:
• “I hear you will go to Paris last month”
Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.”
• “I am sure you will.”
Should be- “I’m sure you did.”
• “Will you see Sophia...”
Should be- “Did you see Sophia...”
• “I did heard Ridley...”
Should be- “I did hear Ridley...”
• “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
• “He will be doing very well.”
Should be- “He was doing very well.”
• “It was called U.T...
Should be- “It is called U.T...”
• “You must saw it.”
Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
Hope this helps; have a good day! :)
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