It affects the story because it allows the readers to know how the author feels towards the following and it also allows the readers to consider what he is thinking.
A and D are the answers to the question
Answer:
Use an apostrophe in the possessive form of a noun to indicate ownership. To
show
ownership, add apostrophe + s to the end of a word, with one exception: To show
ownership with a plural noun already ending in s add only the apostrophe.
All singular nouns show possession by adding apostrophe + s ('s), including those
that already end in s.
Examples:
A boy's shirt is under the chair.
The child's toy was on the shelf.
Lois's book is fascinating.
The bus's door was still open
The speaker is unbiased, an opinion is your opinion, usually stated with facts on why you think that.
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because of verb tense, lack of pronouns, and lack of transitions words. The writer could have different tenses in the sentences to add variety to the paragraph and to create a timeline. Moreover, the use of personal pronouns to substitute the word Cory could have change the sentences. Finally, transition word could have add variety and cohesion to the paragraph.