Constructive feedback reinforces positive behavior and offers a critique in a direct but respectful way. If given in a negative or rude way, criticism might not only hurt the feelings of the receiver but also reinforce negative behavior. Blending praise and suggestions make the feedback polite and efficient.
In the excerpt, the two parts that contain constructive feedback are:
<em>'My favorite part of the essay was when you described your grandmother's reaction after finding the frog in her purse because it was so funny and so vivid.'</em>
<em>'I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to.'</em>
The first section reinforces positive behavior by offering a compliment while the second one offers a suggestion for improvement.
The other sections criticize his friend's paper in a negative way, making harsh comments without offering any suggestions or solutions to the flaws found.
In “Ah, Are You Digging on My Grave?” The person who is digging in the grave is her dog
D. First and second lines rhyme; third and fourth rhyme.
Explanation: Song and wrong rhyme, span and man rhyme. Hope this helped :)
True that is so true frederick was tired of being slaved
Answer:
Explanation: i think the need to survive makes someone different because living your life and going through the motions are different things. once you learn to really survive and live it to the fullest that can change your outlook on life and how you live it! sorry it’s not your whole essay but that should help you get started with an idea :)
