Answer:
Active voice and better descriptive verbs were used to strengthen the descriptive language.
Explanation:
Passive voice, using helping verbs, was used in the first draft. By using active voice (action verbs) in a more descriptive manner, the revision was much more moving, descriptive, appealing, and interesting. For example, "felt terrible" was changed to "heart broke", and "saw" was changed to "spotted".
Answer:only fight if. Britain is unwilling to negotiate.
Explanation:
Answer:
1. "...<em><u>like</u></em> the rings inside a tree trunk"
2. "...<em>like</em> my little wooden dolls that fit one inside the other"
3. "... the way you grow old is <em>kind of </em><u><em>like</em></u> an onion
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Explanation:
A simile is a comparison such as like, as, and than. I used the most probable similes compared to other sentences with the word "like".
