I think hope is the being able to get through the dark and see the light at the end of the tunnel. hope is being in hard times....but knowing it will get better. hope is also being ok and knowing things will be amazing. extraordinary.
If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
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The end of a complete sentence should be marked by a period, a question mark, or an exclamation point. If a sentence is not complete and it is terminated by a period, we have a sentence fragment as in the sentence below.
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were
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They were In third in the race sound better then, They be third in the race