Answer:
It's good
Explanation:
It's good however, do you need to add the same line on "Gleaming eyes, gleaming crystal eyes"?
Answer: famiy
Explanation: luke ( thats the theif name i think) stole the bolt because his dad didn't care about him and posidin never helped his son and left percys mom on her own.
2, "easy to see" for example, when there's something easy to see, you say, "plainly in sight"
Answer:
If your thinking about creating a book, then create a scenorio and characters in your head and just let your mind expand on its own. Get ideas from other books, study different types of characters and personalites, and there's a bunch of websites too that can generate some ideas for you :)
