Question

Read the scenario. Jeremy wants to revise a sentence to create sense of playfulness. Which revision uses precise language to achieve the desired effect? A. The dog came into the house B. The dog galloped into the house C. The dog walked into the house D. The dog is going into the house.

Answer 1

The correct answer is B. The dog galloped into the house.

To gallop means to run very fast, and it describes what the dog has done perfectly. The other sentences aren't as descriptive as sentence B - verbs such as came into, walked into, and is going into aren't as strong words as galloped is, which is why revision B is the best one.