Here is the revised one. :)
"I went to a camp during my fourth grade however, that was already a long time ago."
Answer: Move the interpretation statement to the beginning of the essay, and use the story's details to support that claim,
Explanation: A analytical essay revolves around the claim, you need to state your claim and then back it up with evidence from the story.
Answer:Specifically, the myth tells the story of a woman who falls through the Sky World only to land on the back of a turtle. With the assistance of several animals, she begins to create the world with dirt from the ocean bottom.
Explanation:
Is there a picture to help me understand
Answer:
Explanation:
trees and bees the make me sing
they hear me cry when i fly
I try and try so hard not to cry
I lie and tell them i am just fine
but i'm not there lies the pain inside
that wont go away so that why i cry
