Answer:
Part A is they were masters of organization.
Part B is in this case, as many as 20,000 skilled laborers worked to built the pyramids.
Explanation:
Answer:
[T]he light moved away from Lemon Brown, but not before Greg saw him hurl his body down the stairs at the men who had come to take his treasure.
Explanation:
The answer since Lemon was trying to hide away from the thugs who had came to take his treasure. It was later that, he whispered to Greg that they are bad men unlike the previous time when he was in good rapport with those men. For him to attack them first before the saw him shows that, the relationship between him and them has changed drastically.
Answer:
See explanation for answer.
Explanation:
Tips:
Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.
I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.
"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.
When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"
Advice:
Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.
Compliments:
I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.
I love your ending, it's very well thought out.
I hope I helped!
Have a lovely day!
Let’s say your brother’s name is Jason
Dear Jason,
I heard you’re going for a vacation, first of all I hope you’re doing well. You know since you’re going out for a vacation take this as an opportunity and why don’t you try playing a sport? Basketball, Volleyball, Swimming, there’s a lot of options. It’s also healthy for you which is great. If you’re lazy and don’t want to play any sports why don’t you try information technology(IT)? It’s like a second language if you know IT very well and in this timeline technology plays a very important part. I hope you do any of these activities! And enjoy your vacation.
Your sister/brother,
(Your name)
