Explanation:
That which befalls me in my Lady's presence
Bars explanation intellectual.
I seem to see a lady wonderful
Spring forth between her lips, one whom no sense
Can fully tell the mind of,and one whence
Another, in beauty, springeth marvelous,
From whom a star goes forth and speaketh thus:
'Now my salvation is gone forth from thee.'"
Revision literally means to “see again” or to basically see something again from a fresh and critical perspective. One of the best things to do during the revision stage is to have someone else proof read the material for you.
The element of gothic fiction that the writer is using is element 8.
Here is what I wrote...
The organizational structure of the story "Achieving your Goals" is in order of importance. The structure of the story was important to developing the author's point of view because it tells the reader in which order she though was least important to most important. You can tell that the organizational structure was order of importance because the author used transition words like "first of all, second of all, and m<span>ost importantly." The theme of this story is to not let anyone tell you that you can't pursue your dreams or reach your goals. For example, when the author said "...it seemed like everyone was telling me what I couldn't do" or when she said "...you should never give up just because someone says you can't accomplish your goal" she meant that if it is your dream, go for it and don't let anyone hold you back.
I haven't submitted the test yet so I don't know what I got yet, but I think this answer is right! Hope this helps!</span>
