can someone proof read this page about a quote from the love hypothesis??? and give any comments or things i should add to make

Question

3 years ago

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it better. everything in green i may change or the wording is off

1 answer:

saw5 [17] · Answer 1 · 2023-01-05T10:32:23+03:00

saw5 [17]3 years ago

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Answer:

comma after tyically; don't use the part in the parenthesis, comma after other hand, adam never silently judged her?

Explanation:

also don't use the word after the paretnthesis, i dont think you know what it means