Answer:
Dr. Naismith first planned to bring outdoor games inside, but they were too physical and cumbersome.
Explanation:
Eliminate repeated words.
Other comments:
'Two' is a number. 'Too' means extra or more than expected-- too many, too much, too late. . .
Two should not be too many to count!
Also be careful to use correct verb forms (planned) (were) to express past tense.
UwU -o- -W- owo
thesis means a prediction or what you think something is.
Hoped you passed it looks hard
Commentary is used to support evidence
Correct on Edge.
