Answer:
It looks like it is going to rain today there are a lot of clouds in the sky the sun is not shining i will play inside if it rains
Explanation:
Condense your writing and only keep the most important ideas. Also add punctuation.
<u>Same sentence + punctuation:</u>
- It looks like it is going to rain today, there are a lot of clouds in the sky and the sun is not shining. I will play inside if it rains.
<u>Other </u><u>ideas</u><u>:</u>
- The cloudy sky makes it look like it's going to rain today, which means I'll have to play inside.
- The sun is hiding behind the clouds and I think it might rain soon, which means I will have to play inside.
- The cloudy sky threatens rain; I will have to play inside if it begins to rain.
(I think you should use a semicolon (;) in the last sentence, not a colon (:) but I may be wrong)
Answer:
Walter is in control and is able to turn down Mr. Lindner's offer with appropriate indignation. Earlier in the play, Walter showed weakness and welcomeness.
Explanation:
My mom says that I should wake up earlier because I have a lot to do in the morning. I'm usually late for school.
Diction- Word choices made for tone and clarity (E)
- Diction is a writer's unique style of writing, especially his word choice or order
Transitions- Words that connect ideas and paragraphs (B)
- Some examples of transitions include and, in addition, next, last, etc...
Unity- Staying on topic in an essay or paragraph (A)
- Your ideas should be united, or on the same topic, to make sure your essay flows well. It wouldn't make sense if you jumped around from topic to topic.
Usage- Correctness of phrases and clauses (C)
- You need to make sure that you <u>use</u> correct phrases and clauses for your writing to make sense.
Syntax- The order of words in a sentence (D)
- There are three types of sentences: simple, compound, and complex.
