Answer:
1. Capitalize the name of the country.
2. Remove the all caps for "do not."
3. Change the informal "you" pronoun to agree with the subject 'people.'
4. Change the exclamation point to a period.
5. Eliminate the contraction for "don't."
6. Replace the word 'impact' for 'effect.'
Thus, .....
Some people in the United States do not care about the environment because they do not see the effects of pollution.
Explanation:
The subject of a clause goes in one slot, the verb in another, and so on. Words that modify another word are attached to the word they modify.
"Because she loves them" is a sentence fragment.
The first one, a brother & sister that immigrated to the Us from Ireland as children. The reason why is because they experienced the struggles as an immigrant first hand instead of using someone else's story, giving it more credibility.