Organize them by when they occurred, so start with the first battle, then have ur conclusion include the resolve of the civil war
Thesis : It is crucial that leaders are careful with the power they receive, because if they abuse their power it could lead to corruption, rebellion, and even being overthrown.
Body paragraph: One important characteristic that is looked for in a leader is the use of powers fairly and correctly. It is such a significant quality because if leaders are careless with their powers it will lead to mayhem and disorder. One example of a leader not being careful with their powers is putting too many of their beliefs and opinions in their decisions. If they’re not careful, their decisions will be too affected and they won’t listen to what the people want. This has been seen many times in history where nation’s leaders have had complete control over decisions and decided to do whatever they please and deem right.
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I think it should change into “The test subject will be observed for the next few days.”
As a leader he should have at least considered the advice of
his men especially since they were on the side of caution. Also a good leader must be careful to weigh
the consequences of his actions before he acts.
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This paragraph is in chronological order!
Hope this helps