Question

Rewrite the paragraph using appropriate substitutes for the substandard words used.

Answer 1

"Many high school English programs do not succeed at getting students ready for college. My brother studied essay writing at his high school, including flicks courses, sci-fi courses, and more. He later failed writing in college. My sister thought she was taking difficult courses at her high school, but she also failed many courses when she reached State U."

Answer 2

Answer:

 Many high school English programs do not succeed at getting students ready for college. My brother studied essay writing at his high school, including flicks courses, sci-fi courses, and more. He later failed writing in college. My sister thought she was taking difficult courses at her high school, but she also failed many courses when she reached State U.