VERY good
I like the intro you wrote maybe add another sentence that is stronger for the last sentence
<span>In Ewe ensembles, the gankogui and axatse function as </span>C. the controlling instruments of the ensemble. Gankogui<span> is an African bell and it is a percussion instrument is made of forged iron and comes in various sizes. Axatse</span><span> is the name of this rattle or idiophone.</span>
All i got is the improvement part which would be to control the natural lens flare and improve it by changing the focus of the camera
