Tim is a clever, hardworking, and introspective boy. He takes quiet, intelligent paths through trying situations, as opposed to his father and brother, who share a boldness and impetuousness.
Answer:
by revising sentence 5 to eliminate the use of slippery slope
by adding the transition for example to the beginning of sentence 5
by adding the transition additionally to the beginning of sentence 4
Explanation:
i got it right
