Answer:
is there supposed to be a question? anyways thanks for giving 5 points away.
Answer:
wordiness
Explanation:
the second line was basically repeating what was already being said in the first line.
Introduction: A telegram is a very short and to the point message sent by telegraph from one place to another and then usually delivered to the receiver in written form.
I would describe the taking of a twenty minute bath during a drought extremely obtuse and unintelligent, during a drought you'd want to save water, not waste it taking excessively long baths.