I don't know this for sure but if an author has something to declare and they can't back it up it's just an idea. So if you want to identify the claim you have to have statistics and facts to prove what you're saying. But remember I am not am expert so whatever you think the answer is go with it. Hope this helps ;)
<span>From the excerpt Little Brother by Carey Doctorow is a story about Marcus who works against the DHS or Department of Homeland Security. In the given paragraph, Marcus kept telling Severe haircut woman that Darryl did not do anything wrong and kept asking why he was in jail. He even questions himself, in spite of being interrogated why was it not him that was in there when in fact it was he that made those internet hacking contents and traffic jamming codes to rebel against DHS. Even severe haircut woman (a nickname he made because he did not know her name) kept saying to him that he is being watched but was never found.</span>
I'd say that the theme of this story encourages us that anyone can be important. Not just lawmakers or rich people or even extroverts, but anyone, whether you're a shy artist or an outgoing sporty-type. Some variation on that is probably what you're looking for, I shouldn't do your work for you! :)
Answer:
- The simple sentences should be balanced with more complex ones.
- Slang terms should be removed
