Answer:
I think it's the second one
You can effectively organize your writing by writing down your main idea, at least five supporting details for the main idea, a conclusion idea, and a hook (eye-catching beginning sentence). Then, you can make a rough draft using the list you made before. Once you finish the rough draft go through and make sure you cover all the points from your list. And then make another draft, this one with more details and explanations than the first draft. From there you can go through your list again and check your capitulation, punctuation, spelling, grammar, and neatness. Then you can start on your final writing. For the final writing you should not have large amounts of information without line breaks and paragraphs. You should also make sure that you have a title, headings, and (optional) pictures or examples, you may also include excerpts from other writings to make your writing more exciting and to keep the attention of your readers.
I think you should break the paragraph down and the one you think you really need maybe try to expire
D. Luca's talents are good enough to win pacifica's heart
