The correct sentence is John attended Sunset Elementary School and graduated from Sunrise High School in May of 1980.
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Answer:good for you
Explanation:This sentence cant be changed into passive voice. HAVE is a non acting verb, this means other verb must be present in the sentence in order to change it into a passive voice. for example; "The car is being had by me" is grammatically incorrect sentence.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
That's to inform because its just telling you information
