Answer:
This seems fine it just needs to be revised (grammar wise)
Explanation:
Hello Professor,
This is ___, I rewrote the essay and would like to know if I can resubmit it. If not, by any chance can I do some extra credit work to recover my score?
Thank you,
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Think of your own experiences, even things as simple as going to the zoo and finding out you really like monkeys. Describe what you were feeling during that moment and what caused you to understand that. Describe your surroundings too
A country's power and influence through <span>diplomacy or military force.</span>
I believe it is the Raven
