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Aneli [31]
3 years ago
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Which revision limits the long lead-in in sentence 3? So that you know in the future, we should be more careful about scheduling

. I’m letting you know so that in the future we are more careful about scheduling calls. In the future, we should be more careful about scheduling.
English
1 answer:
Naddika [18.5K]3 years ago
7 0

Answer: In the future, we should be more careful about scheduling

Passage: You scheduled seven conference calls for this morning between 10 and 11 a.m. [2] Generally, the company limits the number of conference calls to three per hour. [3] I’m letting you know that in the future, we should be more careful about scheduling.

Explanation: The third sentence contains unnecessary fillers.  The key point in the sentence is to be more careful about call scheduling. '<em>I’m letting you know that in the future</em>' can be replaced with '<em>in the future.</em>' By dropping the unnecessary filler '<em>I'm letting you know that</em>', the meaning does not change but the sentence becomes more concise, has more clarity and is more deliberate.

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